We read a book in our workshop and were asked to make a couple paragraphs of how you think the story started.
Please can you give me some feedback on my story and what you though about it.
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Lilac rose slowly. She gazed out the window, the sun washed over her face making her eyes burn.
She realized that it was Saturday and there was NO SCHOOL... WAIT the thought pierced her hard. Lilac had been dreading this day for ages.
It was the Trek Day. NOOOO she screamed as her Grandad slammed open the door and pronounced "Happy Trek Day".
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